Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
Some people say that students should take up employment before joining a university to continue further study. I would completely agree with this opinion as the invaluable practical experience gained will help students to perform better in their academics and moreover, will give them financial freedom. This essay will explain this in more detail.
First of all, students who work in the area of specialized course which they intend to study at a university, will greatly help them in understanding the concepts faster and will score better when compared to the students with no job experience. They can correlate the academic lessons with the hands on knowledge they gained during their employment. This is quite evident when we examine the report, published by University of Michigan that the students who have prior work experience, scored better when compared to those who doesn’t have job experience.
Secondly, there are monetary benefits. Working in a firm will give the students financial freedom and some students can even pay their tuition fees with the money they saved during their employment. This gives them a sense of responsibility and will make them feel proud of being independent. While interviewing a professor at Cambridge University, he mentioned that students who pay the tuition fee with their hard earned money, often feel responsible and work hard to achieve good grades in their exams.
In summary, taking up an employment in their relevant field of study will help students who wish to join university. This will also make them financially independent. In future, more students will take up an employment before starting their education at a university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...also make them financially independent. In future, more students will take up an employme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29259259259 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78311832293 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540740740741 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1996263777 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163633893274 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631320077819 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473065042448 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109712377536 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00851925887484 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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