Whether all kind of information in the world should be shared freely or not, is contentious subject. In this essay both side will be analysed before a conclusion will be reached.
In one hand, some support the idea that follow of information freely in the world in the world can be improved the level and quality our lives in all aspect. For example, if students have a free access to information in the word in all aspect it may prevent to repeat some mistake in their research or academic projects and they can use of the experience that is shared in their paper. As a result, this example can be showed access people to the information have advantage to our society and this is clear why they support this opinion.
On the other hand, although the above reason, the opposite side have advocated by some people. This camp argue that, some information have great importance and should not be shared freely and without any charge. This group contend that some information take much time, cost, and effort to achieve and if these data cannot bring any money to them, they would be disappointed and lose their incentive to continue their activity. Business company, for instance, if their results of the experience are shared to the all people without any payment, this cannot be motivated them to continue their project and even their component may use this information to beat them in compete between them.
Following this look, it is felt that although the free follow of information have indisputable drawbacks, the advantages of this event are outweighed.
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...l aspect. For example, if students have a free access to information in the word in all aspec...
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...s clear why they support this opinion. On the other hand, although the above re...
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... to beat them in compete between them. Following this look, it is felt that alt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85767790262 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53962964828 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50936329588 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3818464936 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.7 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237740272209 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110659875799 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047213768676 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141527951613 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607885481503 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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