The stipulated pie diagrams illustrates the information regarding the ages of population in 2000 and the expected population in 2050 in Yemen and Italy. The mentioned parameters are 0-14 years, 15-59 years, 60+ years.
It has been clear from the data that, in 2000 Yemenis population was dominated by children and teenagers. They constituted more than half (50.1%) of the total population. Adults and matured people accounted for almost half portion (46.3%) of Yemen's total community and a mere 3.2% of folks were from senior citizens category. Whereas, in Italy 15-59 age group were responsible for almost three fourth (61.6%) of the total public in 2000 followed by old age people (24.1%) and 0-14 years (14.3%) category.
On the other hand, 2050's expected population rate is showing a complete different proportions. In Yemen, it is expected to increase the percentage of matured people by 9% . while 0-14 year age group's strength will be decided by almost 13%. However Italy's predicted figures showing some extraordinary trend, old age people's proportion is expected to be doubled (42.3%). However, 15-59 years category and 0-14 years category expected to experience some decline of 15% and 3% respectively.
In conclusion, both countries population proportion are expected to show a considerable change during the course of 50 years of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
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Suggestion: While
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Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
... expected to show a considerable change during the course of 50 years of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27570093458 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78851077103 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4371605187 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0833333333 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143852952344 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548727728182 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625672455789 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880754956861 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521645646888 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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