Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visitmuseums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit
museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Do you like to visit a museum when you visit a new place? I'd love to. Because it's an easy way to
know the history, the custom, the people, the culture and natural environment there.
When you arrive at a place, ask which kind of museum they have. To do this you can know what
the people there like. For example, if there are a lot of are museums, the people must like art very
much. So you can enjoy an atmosphere of art there.

If there is a history museum, it's the best way to know the history of this area. It can tell you when
the area was built, whether it has a long history, who came here first, what happened in this
area—maybe a revolution or a war, what changed the people's lives there, and so on. If you want to
know the people there, you must know the history there. Because it's history what affect people's
behavior, emotion, and custom. If there is a special festival, maybe it's related to a historical
affair.

Want to visit a nature museum? It's a good idea. There must be introduction to the natural environment there. Why to know that? We can get information about why people there eat this
kind of food, maybe it's because of the weather. And where is the best place to visit in this area?

Go to visit an art museum. Which kind of art do you find there? Modern art? Then it may be a
modern place. Classical art? It may be a city with a long history. Maybe you can enjoy an old way
of life there.

Don't forget the science museum. It can tell you how the people developed their technology,
whether the science there is well developed. Do people use new technology to develop this area?
If not, it's the best explanation to the question why people there fall behind with people in other
areas.

So go to a museum, it can tell you about a new place more than you think.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, then, well, for example, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36070381232 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22052042328 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439882697947 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2845601562 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.1071428571 100.406767564 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1785714286 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.53405017921 397% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265633462825 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769635534677 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750932754411 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982947050369 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667563207443 0.0645574589148 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 11.7677419355 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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