In order to succeed, it is better to be more like others than different from everyone else. Agree or disagree?
We have entered in the era where judgment is everywhere and being unique is unacceptable and has becoming more difficult. Contrary to those people who hold the idea that it is better to more like others than different from everyone else in order to succeed, I am of the opinion that being unique is more important for a person to be successful because being unique provides us more chances to show our talent and helps me make more true friends.
Uniqueness provides us with more opportunities to show our talent. People different from surroundings can get attention easily, thus, have more chances to show their talent, which contributes directly to one’s success. A prime example from my own experience may shed some light on this point. Once a time, I disagreed with one decision made by monitor while others in my class all support him. My teacher asked me about the reason, and I told her my opinion and explanation, which earned teacher’s strong support. After that, I always talk to my teacher and shared some thought of mine with her, from which I gained a lot of benefit. Finally, my teacher wrote a recommendation letter for me when I was applying for a university. From this story, being unique instead of duplication of others helped me to have more chances to show my talent and thought with others and contributes to my success in university application.
Being uniqueness helps us make more true friends, and thus, enlarge our social network, which is the key factor in achieving success. Recently research shows that a unique person makes more true friends. For people who being unique, his friendship tends to be more based on common thought and interest, which exerts positive effect on achieving long-lasting friendship. Take my mother for example, she met her lifetime best friend when she was taking a dance class. Based on common interest, they cherish each other and make the friendship last for thirty years. Thus, being uniqueness helps us obtain true and long-lasting friendship.
Essentially, uniqueness contributes directly to success in way of brings us more opportunities and is helpful in obtaining true friendship. Thus, I support the idea that in order to succeed, people should be more different from others instead of being a duplication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00787401575 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7811393194 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490813648294 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6967778366 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277968092293 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089530687939 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110060318388 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214623802013 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114767220802 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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