Women are accepted as a second gender. And most people agree that it is because of women themselves. Do you agree with that idea?
Write your opinions and personal experience on that issue.
Today, gender inequality is one of the main issue around the globe and most countries have been trying to handle that problem in order to provide gender equality in all kinds fields of state. And there are many supportive rules and conventions which help the states in terms of eliminating sexual harassment and abuse towards women as well. Despite all those actions, still gender inequality remains as a global threat in the world, especially in developing and less-developed countries. And many people think that, it is because of women themselves.
In my opinion, this argument is almost right from the perspective of developing countries; if women want to get the rights which provided by a country’s constitution or whatever official document, first of all they should take an action or responsibility in order to achieve, even men don’t let them act. Because all those liberties are their incontestable rights.
However, women living in mostly developing or less-developed countries, not only avoiding of taking an action, but also underestimate themselves; for example, if a girl want to pursue her education in abroad or wherever, first of all, mothers are being anxious and always try to draw away their girls from this intention. And they mostly pretend that this is the best way for girls, because the girls might encounter different problems, such as not to get married.
Year after year, this tendency is getting change, but still it is preserved its actuality in many countries. Women themselves teach their girls to be second gender, and to live under men’s surveillance in future. Generally, women should avoid such kind of upbringing and behavior against the girls in terms of eliminating of underestimation. The girls are taught as leader of a community in future and they always need to be supported by their family. A mother is the core member of family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 315, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ieve, even men don't let them act. Because all those liberties are their incontest...
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Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...d to live under men's surveillance in future. Generally, women should avoid such kin...
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Line 4, column 393, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irls are taught as leader of a community in future and they always need to be sup...
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Line 4, column 498, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... A mother is the core member of family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, well, for example, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13268608414 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.913796958 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588996763754 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.9644190633 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148152090625 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598483710386 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621198695602 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912389647269 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325989201558 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.