The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump wwork. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below says how a solar powered waterpump works.
The are four main steps a solar powered water pump works. The diagram beginning with solar energy and finishing with step to village
The sun spread temperatures, light and it called energy. Energy from the sun was absorbed by solar panel, after that solar energy was gone to photovoltaic cells maked DC power from panel. DC power from panel moved by pipes to big keg has test-tube shape. The keg has three main parts: borepump, under ground bore or well and pipes. The water was maked full particular level, the water was farmed by solar energy. After all, water moved to water tank and shifted to village
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s how a solar powered waterpump works. The are four main steps a solar powered water p...
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Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...steps a solar powered water pump works. The diagram beginning with solar energy and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 553.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 117.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7264957265 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28886816799 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11814117211 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 171.9 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1158783999 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.125 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249758927791 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122605872079 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877133754023 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204587001323 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494326785495 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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