"When computer first appeared on the scene, it was thought they would make us more productive in providing goods and services, smarter and possibly happier. Sceptics claim that the opposite is true as computers have proved disappointing in terms of productivity, and have made us less happy and more stupid because information is not knowledge.
Which of these points of view do you agree with most? Support your agreement with reasons and/or examples from your own experience and observations.
Computers are widely used in every corner of the world to facilitate the big and difficult task efficiently and effectively. The important part of the computer technologies cannot be denied in any sense even if it has some demerits that some people believe a threat to the life.
It is obvious that everybody love to have computers at work, school, home and industries. Not only it is portable but the speed, accuracy and reliability, at which the tasks can be performed, is admirable. The popularity of computer is increasing as huge amount can be done in very short period which minimizes cost resulting great productivity. For example, computers are used in sophisticated scientific works to perform calculations that human cannot finish in decades such as storing terabyte of data and information. Thus, the life is as easier and convenient as possible in every sector.
In some extent computers create digital divide as in some areas of the world are deprived from the access of computers and internet. Similarly, the versatility of computers usage can diminish the human intellectual ability as heavily reliance on computers for every single piece of work. For, example, using calculator from school level will harshen their brain and ultimately they will not be able to do small calculations using brain. This creates a threat to human intelligence level in the future. There is no need to study if every single task is performed by computers. Consequently, the rate of unemployment is becoming the major problem in the world.
The advantages of computers are undeniable and inevitable for human beings. Today's life style that everyone is enjoying is due to the innovations of computer technologies. Even if we cannot deny the fact that computer makes human mind dull, the widespread contentment it provided is incredible.
- People learn in different ways Some people learn by doing things other people learn by reading about things others learn by listening to people talk about things Which of these methods of learning is best for you Use specific examples to support your choi 78
- When computer first appeared on the scene it was thought they would make us more productive in providing goods and services smarter and possibly happier Sceptics claim that the opposite is true as computers have proved disappointing in terms of productivi 89
- Machines are increasingly replacing human workers Discuss the advantages and disadvantages with regards to this statement 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...convenient as possible in every sector. In some extent computers create digital ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, similarly, so, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17785234899 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95712991929 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1526330427 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138896116072 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472686314756 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356806320114 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091861801986 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242440723897 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.