Besides the positive aspects TV ads still exist some drawbacks. The first negative aspect, it makes us be not comfortable. For example, when we are watching a interesting program, it disrupts this program. I suppose that you are concentrating on an enjoyable item on TV, ads appear which make you are lost focus. This disruptions ruin our enjoyment. Moreover, advertising encourages people to buy more than what they need. Sometimes, because of the appeal through the words to marketing that we are attracted too much even buy goods which were available or not required, of course this will lead to a wasteful spending. Finally,the an extension point is that the level of difficulty to change. While the newspaper ads, the updated price or special promotions are often simply changed the coupon, but for advertising on TV is that you have to update the script and turned the whole piece advertising, which costs more money.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Nguyen Thi Thanh b1208303
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...able. For example, when we are watching a interesting program, it disrupts this p...
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Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...s appear which make you are lost focus. This disruptions ruin our enjoyment. Moreove...
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Line 1, column 628, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ill lead to a wasteful spending. Finally,the an extension point is that the level of...
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Line 1, column 629, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
...ll lead to a wasteful spending. Finally,the an extension point is that the level of di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, i suppose, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 154.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77278049768 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720779220779 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.302131228 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117678797255 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401423456987 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460563222087 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117678797255 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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