Dear Shaun,
I am writing to let you know that I will not be able to join office next week because of the unforseen course of event that happened to me yesterday. Please allow me to elaborate.
Yesterday night, while travelling back from friend's house, I met with an accident that left me with one broken rib and couple of bruises on the hand. I immediately sought the medical attention and I am currently being operated upon in the hospital. As per the doctor's advice I am strictly confined to the bed and on mandatory rest of two weeks, the time required to heal the rib and bruises.
I hope you can understand the criticality of the situation I have been put in. Consequently, I request you to please let me delay my joining date by further one week. I assure you that I will make up for the days I have lost in the upcoming months. I am very sorry for any inconvenience I might have caused because of this late joing.
Waiting to hear from you soon.
Your gratefully,
Amar Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: YESTERDAY_NIGHT[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'last night' is used.
Suggestion: Last night
...rday. Please allow me to elaborate. Yesterday night, while travelling back from friends hou...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...erated upon in the hospital. As per the doctors advice I am strictly confined to the be...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46448087432 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56639854757 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644808743169 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.841804877 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2727272727 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238310338393 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865413715975 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728752945275 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133982342738 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760962672996 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.