News editors decide what to broadcast on TV and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence their decisions? Have we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
The media, I firmly believe, has played a vital role in every society, either developing countries or advanced ones. The question, however, there are a myriad various elements which ranging from a number of the followers to theme of the media. I would restate that there should be a balance between the good and bad news which reporters broadcast in the different media.
Granted, the most essential point which should consider is a rate of the viewers since if we attract countless followers, admittedly we can earn more money. Hence, at the first glance we should attempt to provide information in a various subject that is practical in all walks of people life such as, modern medical care ways, newest political issues and so on. Also, there are some potent people who directly observe and control the news which reporters want to publish. Most of the time they politician try to distort the facts of misleading public by censoring the information in order to maintain the situation much safer and hide their activities as well.
On the other hand, there are a vast amount of good and bad happenings and events occur, either in your country or the faraway ones. Also, reporters should observe the source of news, ensure that the news is reliable and there is not any exaggeration and finally extract the valuable ones. Moreover, positive and negative effect that news can have on fellows should be not only controlled but also balanced.
All things considered, news filtering caused by a mixture of elements namely a number of viewers and variety of the subjects. Nevertheless I wholeheartedly would reaffirm that there is a relevance between the number of news which are painful or cheerful.
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for examples working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
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- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. [ATTENTION: This answer got a 4.0 in IELTS.]To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 41
- The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Althoughsome of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology hasbeen positive.What are your opinions on this? 84
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views and gi 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'element'?
Suggestion: element
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the newest'.
Suggestion: , the newest
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...of viewers and variety of the subjects. Nevertheless I wholeheartedly would reaffirm that th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95804195804 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59525366419 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6060405431 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198240144688 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749305451008 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670828997919 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119783939423 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324207395261 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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