Nowadays, legally the responsibility of children's acts has become a long-running dispute among public all around the globe, which leads to a moot question " parents should be legally responsible for their children's acts or not?". It is a widely held a view that parents should legally responsible for their children behaviour, whereas I tend to believe that answer is that parents should raise offsprings in good conditions and children should consider their manners.
To begin with, there are several reasons that I support parents have a big influence on juveniles to shape their personalities. For examples, a group of social researchers, working in a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study among different young children to understand the relationship between their way which they upbringing and the way the treat with others. Therefore, the result was statistically significant and revealed that those their parents have more responsibilities about their children have three times more likely better person in their future.
Hoewer, there is little room doubt that people should learn that they are responsible for their acts from an early age. First and foremost is that in the younger age the character of individuals will shape so school child is recommended to be aware of their personality at the school.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that needless to say that parents should do their best to provide the better condition for children to nurture them and children hope to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...onsibility of childrens acts has become a long-running dispute among public all around the glo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, whereas, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37190082645 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97291004109 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582644628099 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.241401334 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.5 104.977214359 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.9669160288 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465700326701 0.242375264174 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193639986283 0.0925447433944 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900993823445 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258100459299 0.151781067708 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106719061189 0.0609392437508 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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