Nowadays, Families are becoming more nuclear than they were ever before. This trend can mostly be attributed to emergence of the technology and ever growing career goals. Despite this, It is of utmost importance that families need to be bought together with the help of elderly in family and educating people about importance of being together. This essay will shed some light on causes of this phenomenon and how it can be averted.
With the advent of technology, people are more connected than ever, consequently people tend to maintain contact through their smartphones or emails rather than in person, causing emotional disconnect among them. Recent study suggests that staggering 50 billion whatsapp messages are sent per day but 1 in 5 people feel lonelier in general, because they lack social skills to communicate and cannot convey their feelings properly. Add to that, ever growing landscape of goals that makes people work towards it giving less or no time to look after their families. People, in general, have become so career oriented that they are forgetting to value importance of family in their lives. This neglect is further creating tensions in families, making families even smaller as people are moving away.
This phenomenon can certainly be alleviated, if elderly in the family come together and arrange some family functions every now and then, which will enable people to come together. My granddad made sure that we always celebrate birthdays together, this in turn always bought all my relatives together. Such instances give people time to emotionally connect with other relatives and bond becomes stronger. On top of that, people need to be made understand the importance of togetherness through TV series or movies, such as telling them how being together means you donot have to face problem in life single handedly, you always have some shoulder to cry on and how being together makes the life meaningful. These ways can certainly help people understand the importance of families in their life and can help everyone in family fell trusted and secure with each other.
To put in a nutshell, even though there are more number of reasons not to be with the family, the advantages of being together far outweigh that of being apart. Grandparents and educating people will certainly help families to be together. I hope more people understand this in the coming future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, so, then, in general, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11675126904 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55625088024 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53807106599 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3244815838 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.588235294 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303669511842 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109045687195 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701797349287 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213841006732 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726977777791 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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