Nowadays, communication is become most powerful skill of human because of modern society. Without communication people will become less powerful and less intelligent than other animals and humans can be destroy. Due to that I disagree with the statement ' It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make a new friends ' for several reasons.
First of all, you can meet with a lot of fabulous people by making a new friends and they will be build a new world for you. People from different country are varies types of personality, environment and culture, so their communication skills would be different. Imagine that, there are a friends from Thailand and Mongolia. In Thailand, there is not snow during winter however in Mongolia, Mongolians are bored from snow and this would be environment difference. About culture, in some counties ' v ' is refer victory however other countries it is refer another meaning.
Secondly, communicate with people who are different types of personality, culture, religion will improve your communication skill for a lot of ways. For example, if your friend's mood is usually angry you learn how to talk with your angry friend. Then when you meet with angry stranger, you do not have a difficulty with talk to them. It can be a important life experience than any other knowledge such as basic science knowledge.
Thirdly or finally, you can get a lot of information from different types of people by making new friends. If you have a friend from another country, you can get a fresh information of his or her country that you could not find on internet or other resources. Moreover, if you have a different interest with your friend, you can feel another feeling from music, movie or something else that are loved by your friend. I think it is most important benefit of making new friends.
In conclusion, keep your old friends is also important but making a new friends is more beneficial . Because of that, I disagree with the statement that is given for the reasons mentioned previously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90751445087 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74198065686 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479768786127 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7256606581 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316995556355 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116392487466 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115466096775 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21464148014 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896247401432 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.