Dear Jagadeesh,
I hope you that you are doing well, next month I am moving to Australia, fortunately, I got a free seat there to pursue my Master's degree at Landford University. It will take one year to complete my course and I enquired to institute for my curriculum, the classes start at 8:00 am and finish at 12:30 pm, remaining rest of the time makes me freely.
As you know, economically my family background is very poor although, the living expenses are might not be affordable but within a year I have to complete my course successfully without any inconvenient. so, I decided to do a temporary job at nearest my University.
I know you have been staying there since 5 years, during this, you may have a huge network with your neighbors. This is the easiest process for you to find a job for me even though according to my Para-Medical field it is highly easy to search a Part-time job in Medical coding companies or in Call-health centers.
I look forward to hearing from you,
Best wishes,
Sivasankar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... successfully without any inconvenient. so, I decided to do a temporary job at nea...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66850828729 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86374435216 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685082872928 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3914719364 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23307483779 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110923538631 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053915282657 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146769958586 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576932627656 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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