Urbanisation is happening almost all around the world in a tremendous manner. More and more people are moving to cities to find a better way of living, as a result the population ratio in large cities are very high as compared to rural parts. In some countries this population difference is reached to an astonishing rate of three to five fold. However, the quality of life in these metropolis are decreasing faster than ever. There are some reasons behind this scenario.
To begin with, most of the large cities are reached it's maximum captivity in terms of both resources and infrastructure facilities. So new arrivals in the municipal areas are finding it difficult to settle with proper housing arrangements, eventually they are forced to live with what they get. Nowadays over crowded flats are very common scene in most of the metropolis. Furthermore because of this erupted population growth, pollution rate is also increased drastically in civic parts of the countries. From water to land everything is being polluted by this catastrophic situation. Moreover, cost of living in these areas are sky rocketed during the recent years due to the unavailability of proper facilities. This also made city dwellers life more complicated.
There are some precautions need to undertaken before things go out of our hand. Authorities should ensure that people are getting decent living conditions when they move to cities by investing more money on infrastructure development and other basic facilities. In addition, governments should spend their money equally in both rural and urban areas, so as to reduce the peoples large movement to certain part of the country. This will help the state to maintain a sustainable balance in all the areas of the nation. What is more, authorities should impose strict rules and regulations regarding the pollution matters in oder to reduce it's effects to minimum.
To recapitulate, every countries are developing in a rapid rate, so the effects of urbanization will increase as time passes. People and authorities should work together to maintain a good quality of life in every parts of the regime, especially in metropolitan areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a tremendous manner" with adverb for "tremendous"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s happening almost all around the world in a tremendous manner. More and more people are moving to cit...
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Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this metropolis' or 'these metropolises'?
Suggestion: this metropolis; these metropolises
...e fold. However, the quality of life in these metropolis are decreasing faster than ever. There ...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...common scene in most of the metropolis. Furthermore because of this erupted population grow...
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Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dwellers'' or 'dweller's'?
Suggestion: dwellers'; dweller's
... proper facilities. This also made city dwellers life more complicated. There are som...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[5]
Message: Did you mean 'undertake'?
Suggestion: undertake
.... There are some precautions need to undertaken before things go out of our hand. Autho...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... equally in both rural and urban areas, so as to reduce the peoples large movement to ce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, in addition, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19034090909 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90982185197 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565340909091 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8292060048 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1578947368 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5263157895 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11668921575 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344320609563 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501803565815 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741811403847 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311365155265 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.