Dear Sir,
I'm writing this letter to bring to your notice the construction of flats in the park opposite my residence at 25, 3rd Street Avenue, Ohio. This is a peaceful establishment with an open ground for children to play and close to 50 families staying nearby that have access to it.
I came across this information from an acquaintance in the local council which is responsible for building the block of flats. I thank him for the useful heads-up but it had to be brought to your notice since this a matter of serious consideration.
Learning about this development took me by surprise as the place chosen for the construction is outrageous. Reason being, this park is the only place where the children staying around can spend their leisure time. To add to it, older people stroll in the park too. Hence, construction of any sort will defeat the afore-metioned purpose, that exist today.
Request you to publish this development in your esteemed newspaper so that it can be brought to the notice of higher authorities and can therefore, prevent the construction. Your support would be deeply appreciated.
Yours sincerely
Rahul Malhotra
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- You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter•Describe the item•Explain where and when you left it•Say what action you would like the company to take 11
- The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?- The reason why you protest it- Make suggestion 87
- The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?- The reason why you protest it- Make suggestion 73
- The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?- The reason why you protest it- Make suggestion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir, Im writing this letter to bring to your no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0207253886 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85933383047 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658031088083 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9686214183 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0909090909 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209635840173 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654210823326 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482472576151 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107817162996 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01029702565 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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