Dear Sir,
I'm writing this letter to bring to your notice the construction of flats in the park opposite my residence at 25, 3rd Street Avenue, Ohio. This is a peaceful establishment with an open ground for children to play and close to 50 families staying nearby that have access to it.
I came across this information from an acquaintance in the local council which is responsible for building the block of flats. I thank him for the useful heads-up but it had to be brought to your notice since this a matter of serious consideration.
Learning about this development took me by surprise as the place chosen for the construction is outrageous. Reason being, this park is the only place where the children staying around can spend their leisure time. To add to it, older people stroll in the park too. Hence, construction of any sort will defeat the afore-mentioned purpose, that exist today. This wouldn't be taken positively by the families.
Request you to publish this development in your esteemed newspaper so that it can be brought to the notice of higher authorities and can therefore, prevent the construction. Your support would be deeply appreciated.
Yours sincerely
Rahul Malhotra
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- The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?- The reason why you protest it- Make suggestion 73
- The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper Where did you hear this news and your opinion The reason why you protest it Make suggestion 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I'm
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Suggestion: wouldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03482587065 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87860713715 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651741293532 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6308158364 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207572748406 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628296678559 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046986002497 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108659053097 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107156588037 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.