You are working for a company. Your Computer is giving some problem and it is affecting your work. Write a letter to the manager in your letter
-describe the problem
-explain how it is affecting your work
-write what you want him to do regarding it
Dear Sir
I am a worker of your esteemed company who work as a web designer from last two years. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to draw your immediate attention on the computer problem which I am facing from last few days.
As, I am working on the news website and it is very significant project, which we give to the client on next monday as per the contract. The main thing about it, I completed 50% work but 50% work is still remaining, which I have to complete in certain days, but I am unable to do it. Because my computer is not working well from last few days, when I start working, it suddenly shut down and sometimes it becomes in the position of hang, which create interruption in my work and hinder me to complete it.
It is essential to unravel the problem as early as possible so that I can complete my project on the time. Further more, I deem that the company computers are very old and need to be reform. If it is possible, bring some more new computers, which contain new features and have a long lasting life.
I would be very grateful if you take some suitable steps to solve this problem and take my suggestion positively. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully 17th febraury 2018
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir I am a worker of your esteemed company who work as a web desig...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours faithfully 17th febraury 2018 ...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 17th febraury 2018 Aman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01709401709 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.20585309288 2.54303337028 283% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594017094017 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.006197947 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.727272727 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216711324554 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784540052692 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385957502982 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972875310104 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588622157148 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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