Who have returned home after living with the family in English speaking country for six months. Write to the family describing the things you left behind. Ask them to send some or all of them to you over to cover the cost
Dear Mr Smith
I am dweller of India, who recently come back from the Australia. In Australia, I was your tennant, who spent six months at your apartment. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to inform you, I forget some of my things at your home.
As, I came Australia for my training course and lived in your house for six month. Last Sunday, I came back at my home country. On, the airport of India, I noticed that I forgot my one back in the room of your house, but it was too late it contains my necessary possession such as my project file, some CD's and reports.These things are very important for me. Because, without these I cannot able to do further work on my project.
I would be very appreciate, if you send me all my belongings urgently with the help of quick mail service. Indeed, I have to submit the project to my boss on next monday. Hence, I request you to send the things. I assured you, that I will pay you the whole charges of the mail. Lastly, I feel very regret for the inconvenience which I caused you.
I would be very grateful if you send my belonging as soon as possible. I am look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely 21th February 2018
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... course and lived in your house for six month. Last Sunday, I came back at my home co...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it was too late it contains my necessary possession such as my project file, some...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...s my project file, some CDs and reports.These things are very important for me. Becau...
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Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...These things are very important for me. Because, without these I cannot able to do furt...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hearing from you. Yours sincerely 21th February 2018 Aman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, lastly, look, so, well, as to, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3436123348 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42885932966 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.773305539 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7333333333 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1333333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177994723295 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675428121809 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435291222799 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094943644836 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060826660537 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.