Tourism is an ever growing industry
What benefits do you think tourism bring to individuals and society
Due to the globalisation, everyone can easily travel to other continents of the world from their home country, which fostering the tourism. Due to this, tourism is augmented day by day in many countries. Tourism gives a lot of immense married to the individuals and the society, which I can portray in the subsequent segments.
To begin with, there is a plethora of Profits, which tourism gave to individuals and to country. Predominantly, tourism can give is the lucrative benefits to the host country, in terms of booming the economy of the country. For instance, India is destination of the many tourist, because of its cultural heritage. Hence, a lot of travellers visit the India in a day. Hence, the economy of the country is growing. Moreover, it can gives the employment to the unemployed people such as guides, drivers etcetera. Through this, it can solve out the problem of unemployment and gives the opportunity to the people to earn their bread and butter.
Leaping further, it can give the liberty to the people to know about the things which are prevailing in all over the world. Besides this, it gives the opportunity to the tourist as well as the dweller of the tourist destination to interact with each other. So, they know about their culture and lifestyles of each other. Apart from this, tourist can acquire the knowledge about the cultural heritage of the host country and local dwellers can improve their communication skills by communicate with them.
To recapitulate, everyone has their own view, I do not deny any of them. I cogitate that, it gives the immense benefits to the host country as well as provide job opportunities to the dwellers of the country
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...he country is growing. Moreover, it can gives the employment to the unemployed people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89547038328 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78863650979 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473867595819 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8798725594 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8125 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10463933411 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401555534864 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528451758675 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741913602478 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054147743634 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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