Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion what are the qualities of a good neighbor?
Neighbors are the people who live near us. The human beings have both good and bad qualities, but in a society these qualities have a direct effect on each other's life. In this composition, I prefer to concentrate on the qualities that a neighbor should have.
Although conditions for living in an apartment is totally different with a house in downtown, taking care of people is the main and only quality for a neighbor. Perhaps you say "What do you mean about taking care of people?", it means that being sensitive about citizenship laws; in fact having good neighbors are in common with obeying the citizenship rules. For example, imagine a situation that your neighbor breaks the citizenship laws; Barking his dog through the night, drives you crazy and sleepy for tomorrow; also, not caring about green space in front of your house and destroying the beautiful landscape by his dog seems so nerve scratching. The worst part comes through the garbage time; it means nothing to him; beside the unpleasant perspective, disgusting garbage smell has made the living place so unbearable for you and passer-byes. In addition, holding parties without considering the time of the party, beside the noisy guests and ear scratching the sound of the tape recorder, sets you on fire and ready to erupt. Also, being so selfish in using the common area and making it a place for personal use, in the long term, causes serious problems that makes the living place too challenging for living.
To sum up, to put the issues into a nutshell, this precious statement comes true for anyone; everything that you like for yourself, accept for others and something that you do not like them, do not accept for the other people.
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