Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
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it is undeniable that age discrimination plays a major role while taking confidential and significant decisions on awarding a higher position or dismissing someone. I believe that discrimination is prerogative of old employees, this essay will discuss discrimination against pioneer of organization cannot be illegal.
Promotions, bonus and other facilities are awarded in professional life on the base of old employees that are also known as senior officials because they contribute more in development of organization, however young talent works also smartly and they also achieve trips to other countries and few fringe benefits also but senior employees have more preference as compared to young talent. In my opinion it is normal to support senior officials.
Discrimination could be made illegal on reason if rest employees petitioned, presents disadvantages of giving enormous benefits to old employees on seniority level rather than performance basis, on the flip I consider that can a chaos for most organizations because it’s common phenomena and nearly related to nepotism.
To conclude, patently this practice is widely use in corporate and other organizations but it has far more advantages for old employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is undeniable that age discrimination p...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'used'.
Suggestion: used
...clude, patently this practice is widely use in corporate and other organizations bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 186.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65053763441 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28168889766 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.022340825 50.4703680194 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.166666667 104.977214359 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.9669160288 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162366231699 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808895210668 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730466469234 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984691874437 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926404394352 0.0609392437508 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 12.6369458128 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 53.1260098522 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.9458128079 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.94827586207 211% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.5123152709 200% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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