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past people are friendly than they are today.
I disagree that past people are friendlier than they are today. In my view, friendly or not friendly is regardless of time factor. However, if compare people in the past and people nowadays, I think today generations are indeed friendlier than the old ancestors. Technologies, mixed of cultures and education are important factors that make people nowadays being friendly widely.
First of all, technologies help people to expand their welcome to new friends any corners of the world. Take a social media called facebook as example. It has a significant role for people all ages to keep connect...
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Sentence: However, if compare people in the past and people nowadays, I think today generations are indeed friendlier than the old ancestors.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to if and compare
Sentence: Second, the mixed of cultures trend has been increasing and it opens people's mind to accept the new friends from different culrtures.
Error: culrtures Suggestion: cultures
Sentence: For example, my school located in San Francisco, has many international students from many countries and I often see my foreign friends from one country that make noise while eating in order to present to the cooker to know that the food is delicious.
Error: cooker Suggestion: cook (is a noun too)
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