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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The curriculum must be the same for every student in the country, because all students should have the same opportunities for development. This idea will permit to compare the level of education between states. Furthermore, international students would have only one curriculum to study. Conversely, there are states with more income than others and they could offer better education to their students.
There are private and public schools. Public schools are supported by the government, these schools have to teach to students with few budget, that´s why most public schools have big class size...
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Description: The fragment life include wealth is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace include with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
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Score: 5.5 - 6.0 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 357 350
No. of Characters: 1892 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.347 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.3 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.554 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.789 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.244 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.421 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.571 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5