Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can beneficial for teenagers and the community as well. Do you agree or disagree.
Social welfare has immense benefits for every community in this complex and Contemporary world jet age of 21st century.Teenagers have great effected by taking participate in social work such as blood donation, money charity, help to needed and so on. Here I am personally inclined with this statement.
As I concerned , unpaid work is part of moral values which are thought to them from childhood by parents and teacher for example offer food to hugery , water to the theristy and many more which make to them social worker and best citizen. Moreover, as universally acknowledged," kindness begest ...
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Sentence: As I concerned , unpaid work is part of moral values which are thought to them from childhood by parents and teacher for example offer food to hugery , water to the theristy and many more which make to them social worker and best citizen.
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Sentence: Moreover, as universally acknowledged,' kindness begest kindness' it shows humanity and affection about others .
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Sentence: Moreover if teenager are encouraged by parents and teachers to help some one during their leisure time then one side time can be consumed in controling some nationaly as well as globaly menace for instence global warming, child marriage, dowry system and many others by them and can be saved themselves from idealness because it is accepted by universally ,'ideal brain is devil's work shop'
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Sentence: On the other hand , some proportion of masses assert that while the age period of 13 to19 person studies regarding his carreer field and future settlement so teenagers need more hard work however, it diverts their mind and concentrate can not be made on education and it is true,'if you chase two rabbits, you will not catch either one'
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Sentence: As per my above disscusion it is evident that, the advantages overweight disadvantages.Number of social evils are mashrooming in this materialistic world but union is strength so teenagers can eradicate esialy those problems due to unpaid work.
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