The diagram illustrates that how the weather information is collected by Australian Bureau of Meteorology, to provide accurate weather forecast. It's shown that there are four main steps in weather broad-casting, those are, collecting the incoming information, analyzing and forecasting the data, preparing the broadcast and finally broadcast is uploaded on media.
As shown in the diagram, the information is collected by three main sources, such as; satellite, radar and the drifting buoy. the collected raw data from the satellite is observed from satellite photos of Australia, whereas, the information from radar is presented on the radar screen. The synoptic charts are obtained from the drifting buoy, which is placed in the sea, in Australia. After collecting the data, it is analyzed, and then organised in the computer. The organised data is then prepared for the broadcasting of the weather conditions.Lastly, an understandable report is created for the public broadcast.
Overall, the broadcast is then delivered to the public via television news, radios and as a recorded announcement in the devices like telephones. So, that the people of Australia are informed regarding the weather conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...satellite, radar and the drifting buoy. the collected raw data from the satellite i...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lastly
... broadcasting of the weather conditions.Lastly, an understandable report is created fo...
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Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ncement in the devices like telephones. So, that the people of Australia are informed re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, lastly, regarding, so, then, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56756756757 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19978085444 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562162162162 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.84214899 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.444444444 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186848598022 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840638693225 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796881496742 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124641297122 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519314307747 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.