You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to your friend and explain
-why did you move
-Describe the new apartment
-Invite him/her to visit
Dear hazel
I hope you must be doing well. It has been a long-time since we had any personal or professional discussion. I'm delighted to inform you about the most blissful news that i own my dream house recently.
As you know, my old house was near to hustle-bustle of main street. It has almost killed tranquil. It was conjusted too. I had to encounter implications even few guests gathered at my home owing to less space. The most disgusting part i often used to reach late at my office due to less access of transportation modes. I'm so happy as my new house is near to my workplace.
Although, it took me long time to fulfill my desire but finally i accomplished it. My apartment is in porsh area of town. It is very well decorated by the modern architecture. It not only has adequate space but also engaged with all the advanced amenities. Earlier, i didn't get time for fitness center but now there is a small gym at home. I can't wait to tell you much more.
It would be a pleasure to see you at my new place.Hope you'll manage time soon to make some more memories. It's a great chance for you to explore rich culture of Jaipur and as well to meet my family. I really hope you can make it.
Pass my regards to your family members
Talk to you soon
Angelina
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Comments
Please check my letter sir...
Please check my letter sir...
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 244 250
No. of Characters: 999 1500
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.952 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.094 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.454 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.662 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.45 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.539 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.155 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ny personal or professional discussion. Im delighted to inform you about the most ...
^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...m you about the most blissful news that i own my dream house recently. As you...
^
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...to less access of transportation modes. Im so happy as my new house is near to my ...
^^
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g time to fulfill my desire but finally i accomplished it. My apartment is in por...
^
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... all the advanced amenities. Earlier, i didnt get time for fitness center but now the...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 343, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...but now there is a small gym at home. I cant wait to tell you much more. It would...
^^^^
Line 9, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hope
...e a pleasure to see you at my new place.Hope youll manage time soon to make some mor...
^^^^
Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...leasure to see you at my new place.Hope youll manage time soon to make some more memo...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...e time soon to make some more memories. Its a great chance for you to explore rich ...
^^^
Line 11, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Pass my regards to your family members Talk to you soon Angelina
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34309623431 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56458393062 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652719665272 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.271541748 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.6315789474 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5789473684 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118128088123 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380004208429 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384092595612 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653255396598 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318949450869 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.0 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.