write an essay describing your community's rules
rules help us live more discipline in the community. at my school, there is a sign that reads,"punctality". so, what is punctality?
punctality is turn up on time, come class on time and have class time table- schedule.
why do we come class on time? because, we show our politeness and respect of other. when we arrive on time. it helps us build up a good habit. we will not missimportant informaton. we learn the value of time. time is invaluable, money can buy everything except time. example, we come late examtime about 15 minutes. we are not allowed to enter the exam room. then, we waste time and waste money to study a gain.
although the rules are in place, some people still do not follow. they regularly come late because there is no punishment for them
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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rules help us live more discipline in the com...
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... live more discipline in the community. at my school, there is a sign that reads,&...
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...at my school, there is a sign that reads,'punctality'. so, what is punctalit...
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...sign that reads,'punctality'. so, what is punctality? punctality is tu...
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...tality'. so, what is punctality? punctality is turn up on time, come class on time ...
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...e and have class time table- schedule. why do we come class on time? because, we s...
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...chedule. why do we come class on time? because, we show our politeness and respect of ...
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...ow our politeness and respect of other. when we arrive on time. it helps us build up...
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...ow our politeness and respect of other. when we arrive on time. it helps us build up...
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...spect of other. when we arrive on time. it helps us build up a good habit. we will...
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...ime. it helps us build up a good habit. we will not missimportant informaton. we l...
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.... we will not missimportant informaton. we learn the value of time. time is invalu...
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...informaton. we learn the value of time. time is invaluable, money can buy everything...
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..., money can buy everything except time. example, we come late examtime about 15 minutes...
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...we come late examtime about 15 minutes. we are not allowed to enter the exam room....
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Suggestion: Then
...are not allowed to enter the exam room. then, we waste time and waste money to study...
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... time and waste money to study a gain. although the rules are in place, some people sti...
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...place, some people still do not follow. they regularly come late because there is no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 640.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63768115942 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22049073846 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 8.0 22.4926829268 36% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.2825779327 43.030603864 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 40.0 112.824112599 35% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.625 22.9334400587 38% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 5.23603664747 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0466194699814 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0168961026622 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372883795529 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456136699873 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559195634314 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 13.2329268293 36% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.82 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.56 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 11.4329268293 31% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.9970731707 47% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 5.0 11.0658536585 45% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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