In the modern world, the scarcity of water has become a heated problem across the world. Some of the main causes of this alarming trend will be discussed before feasible measures are stated to prevent it from further exarcebated.
There is no doubt that the increased demand for freshwater is associated with the boom of the population size. This reason leads to rapid water request in three different sectors namely agriculture, industry and households. Regarding agricultural industry, the irrigation consumes a large amount of water. Also, people now have a tendency of using all types of poisonous chemicals and pesticides for their farming, which warns the natural water distribution. In many parts of the world, many factories and industry in general use a huge water supply for their operations. It has been reported by a US newspaper that steel manufacturing processes in this country are in great demand for a huge amount of water, which poses a threat to the capability of providing people with enough drinking water in the near future. From the household perspectives, people are more in need of water usage because of the pressure of rapid population growth, which contributes to worsen the situation.
Despite the devastating degradation of water, some feasible solutions should be implemented by both the governments and individuals. In reference to government's agenda, it is extremely serious for countries's states to control the increasing rate of population growth. Firstly, government should set out rules such as a protocol to deal with the population explosion. That is the way that China, for example, has recently followed. In particular, China has set the law of limitation on the number of offspring a couple can have. With the restriction on the number of children in each family, China has sucessfully reduced the rate of population boom, and that has in turn cut down the resulting damages in water provision and living environment. The government also need to build water pine systems to encourage citizens to reuse recycled water. In respect to individuals' actions, it is important and necessary for residents to save the natural water resources as many ways as possible. For instance, they should reduce the over- consuming of chemical compounds on their fields. Local people should develop the modern recycling system at their own houses to reuse domestic water regularly as well.
In conlusion, the current issue of dealing with the water shortage requires necessary actions of both governments and individuals. While there are many solutions to this problem, the role of the authority in controlling the population boom and balanced water distribution is indispensable.
- Some people believe that if a police force carries guns, this encourages higher level of violence int hat society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
- There is a growing demand for freshwater nowadays and this is becoming aglobal problem. Discuss the possiblecauses for it. What measures can betaken by governments and individuals toovercome this problems? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in general, in particular, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2295.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25171624714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91341465653 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54004576659 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.885916267 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8095238095 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168387168064 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530831850266 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387267367748 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105390192828 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00707681447974 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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