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spread of Multinational Companies due to globalisation is positive or negative? discuss both sides and state your opinion.
Globalisation is an economic tidal wave that is sweeping over the world and undoubtedly the spread of multinational companies(MNCs) are the direct effect of globalization. Some people think that this spread is a positive thing while other argue that it could be detrimental for the host country. In this essay, I am going to write about both points of view and state my opinion.
There are several reasons why many advocate that MNC are detrimental to the communities to which they operate. The principal reason is perhaps MNC are accused of social un-justice, unfair working condition, as wel...
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Sentence: Supporters of globalisation argue that it has the potential to make this world a better place to live in and solve some deep seated problems like unemployment and poverty.
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