Last year you attended an intensive english course at the Darvin College of english.your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickely as possible.
Write a letter to the principal of the college and requestbhim to send the copies of the required documents as you have lost the original documents.
Dear Sir
I was one of your student of July 2017 batch having I.D number 01635, I am inscribing this missive to request you for duplicate copies of my report and assignment.
After I attended training from your college, I have got very good job but due to some personal reason, Inhave applied in industry near to mu hometown and my new employer is asking for the documents rekated to the training course I attended at your institute.
Actually what happended is after resigning from my previous employer, I booked 'Packers amd Movers' for my home shifting but during packaging and transportation my original documents which includes training certificate and assigent got lost, Which I need it for my new job.
At the end, Hope you understand my situation and provide me duplicate copies by any means possible.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully
Anand Dixit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: D
...our student of July 2017 batch having I.D number 01635, I am inscribing this miss...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 144.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06944444444 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72813275581 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694444444444 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.3384222436 44.8134815571 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 76.5299724578 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 16.8248392259 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192540831327 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121721510145 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581090218572 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114212771628 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619238798505 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 8.37731958763 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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