Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to you with great joy in my heart and a smile on my face. Please accept my sincere gratitude and many thanks for arranging such a wonderful get together. Let me be very honest with you that initially I was very skeptical myself with regard to the success of this party. But in the end, everything turned out to be pretty well orchestrated.
The fun started on 17th of February 2018 at 7'o clock in the evening when me and my family welcomed my 90-year old grandfather in the venue with some great old country music & superb decor. The party started sharp at 07:30 as decided. After a few rounds of drinks and evening snacks, the family including me and my lovely grandfather took center stage for the cake cutting ceremony. The knife pierced through the creamy chocolate cake at sharp 8'o clock which was followed by a lot of fun and frolic on the dance floor. The dinner was served at exactly 9'o clock, just as planned which was then followed by plethora of dance performances by all the oldies in the family. Surprisingly, we wrapped up the party by 11'o clock in the night.
I truly believe that the sheer perfection with which everything was executed on the venue made the party a huge success and definitely something to be remembered by my grandfather for a long time. Food, ambiance, service, entertainment was top notch.
I would not forget to extend my thanks to the on-floor service manager who left no table un-turned to take care of the elders in my family. Especially, the last minute DJ & mic equipment requests were catered to in quick turnaround time.
In the end, I would once again like to thank you for the lovely evening we had at your venue and I promise to recommend the party hall to all my friends.
Your Thankfully,
Puneet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
...d, ambiance, service, entertainment was top notch. I would not forget to extend my tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, as to, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 26.3917525773 197% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 937.175257732 158% => OK
No of words: 321.0 206.0 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61682242991 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5405264137 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 290.88556701 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3836622148 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209600562072 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067342605205 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053046996263 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116084670038 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506823138739 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.