It is detrimental to adjust ones own thoughts than to follow them. I completely agree with this statement. considering factors like pollution, health issues, globally human being on an average lives for 60-70 years, i feel that even in this short span of live of Homosapiens why should one compromise.
Upon compromising on ones ideas one might not be happy. for example a student wants to become doctor but his desire is denied by his parents and they force him to pursue other profession. Compromising his dreams he impassively joins the course suggested by his parents,but dreaming of becoming doctor will never leave from his mind and also paying attention to course he forcefully chose was also not germinating. It conspicuously states that physically he is alive mentally he is dead.
Limiting one's thoughts may also affect his career. considering a politician who is obliging to work for welfare of country is often contradicted by opponents in majority, he has to pause his activity which in turn kills his heart of helplessness.
some people claim that it is always advisable to take suggestions from veterans because some might fail in his life by following their dreams, one regrets for the result he obtained but not for the decision he took .
to sum up one should not compromise his dreams, it is ok to fail in life instead of making an entire life as failure.
- It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In d 64
- The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disag 33
- It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In d 33
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as to, for example, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80161629609 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645299145299 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1526040336 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.727272727 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113320430512 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561704530687 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451989306527 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653087266812 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307640941574 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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