The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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...the most important to finance the public services than to spend a lot of money in...
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...ter .I partially agree with this opinion , but i think allocate a proper funding o...
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... sector is also principal for society. One the one hand, the government...
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...d finance public services in first place . Because the objective of community is ...
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...public services in first place . Because the objective of community is to make ea...
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...le for every person live in this country .They make a big budget in different vita...
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...different vital sector such as education , health, and also public construction .A...
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...n , health, and also public construction .Although , any sector have not enough mo...
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...ny sector have not enough money spending , many people feel this and try to change...
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... many people feel this and try to change .For example , after the second world war...
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...t in the principal sector then satisfied citizens with life .Thats why , it is im...
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...ector then satisfied citizens with life .Thats why , it is important to spend a l...
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...nd a lot of money in the public services , however community should allocate a sma...
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...ocate a small budget for the arts sector . One the other hand, the gover...
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...hould allocate a proper funding in music , arts , and theater which is much impor...
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...llocate a proper funding in music , arts , and theater which is much important to...
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...er funding in music , arts , and theater which is much important to develop skill...
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...elop skills of human as well as to grow the think way .For instance,the arts sector elimi...
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...te the human feel anxiety in daily life , the arts sector change them.To summariz...
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...lture is so interesting with people than community should allocate a small budget...
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...ate a big funding in public services and a proper budget in arts sector . ...
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...ices and a proper budget in arts sector .
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...s and a proper budget in arts sector .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92134831461 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53448293363 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479400749064 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.717693036 49.4020404114 420% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.8 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.4 20.7667163134 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.4 7.06120827912 331% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 50.0 5.01903807615 996% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180956642477 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133842998225 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380637832614 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138849499499 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321872495308 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.