Employers most the the time ask people applying for job person questions for their hobbies,interest or married or singal.Do you agree or disagree.
Employers many times Enquire people applying for jobs for individual quarries such as their hobbies and interests and either they are married or single.In my opinion,this accumulation of information relevant and beneficial.
To begin,there are many fold points to sure up my views.First and foremost is employers should get this type of information,only then he will be able to choose most suitable Person for his organization.Without knowing the personal details of a man,one can not be judged properly.To have the knowledge of background is also essential in prevention of stealing,robbery and so many other misshapening.
Secondly,the statue of a man can be known through these details weather he belongs to a high society or living under poverty line.By this employers can judge the timing which he will provide to his work.For instance,the person living in the absence of basic things can perform his duty better than who is enjoying a luxurious life.
In my view,to enquire about the personal details is lucrative for all institutions.several can be avoided.Suitable man can be chosen for suitable job.On the other hand,if employers have an employee without having his personal information can lead to harm to their organization or would suffer the absence of quality person.
Apart from it,employers must know about the interest and hobbies of their employees.Interest has a vital role in getting success.For example,a man who is not interesting in doing job then this person would anticipated to be lost of any organization.Without interest man's life is like birds without wings.
To conclude,again I strongly accord with given statement.However,it should be in limit,not about the details which an employee does not want to disclose.
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also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43956043956 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58740672984 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.5265504233 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 247.5 106.682146367 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.5 20.7667163134 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.3333333333 7.06120827912 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256789378888 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140567684996 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100680914519 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140567684996 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100680914519 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.16 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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