Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many athletes become a successful person. They could get much money from sport activities. I personally agree that it is fair for them, while some people think it is not fair for them who work in important professions.
As we could see, in every country, there are always successful sports professionals that could bring their countries more famous. A country could be able to become a great country just because their own athletes. I think it is not easy to become a successful person in sport activity. They have to be a professional athlete. Moreover, they need special academic to be a success athlete. Therefore, I think they deserve to get much money than other people who work in important professions. In fact, many successful football players become famous and rich, such as Lionel Messi. He got the highest salary compares with the other football players, even his salary is biggest than doctors in Indonesia. I believe, every people have their own passions.
On the other hand, there are some people think that is really unfair. They have better job than many athletes. They have higher education than many athletes. Sometimes, it is true that it looks unfair if many athletes could earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Take one example, it is not easy to become a doctor. They have to take high education and it takes long time. However, it seems to be unfair if we compare with a football player. It looks easy for them to earn more money. They just need some skills to become a professional athlete then it looks unfair.
However, I believe every people have their own ability to make their life become more success. In my opinion, it is fair for them who work as professional athletes to get much money, while some people do not agree with this fact.
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