People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
People are always worried about his better life and future. Sometimes people have face very critical situation where some decisions making are require.When people felt in emotion and take a decision which is not appropriate for that situation, and fall in conflict in future when some unexpected situation face. Generally it is every human tendency to take a decision inappropriate when he and she felt in emotion.
There are many example is history when king have a made a decision with emotion and face unexpected result. For example during world war america and japan were attacked on russia without any proof that russia attacks on america in future. Consequently result of this america and japan face unexpected and destructive situation during world war.Same as when Students have not take
good decision for his interested course in undergraduate study than it will generate problem for student study. Because students not take good course for their, Consequently He/She does not concern about subjects that is not relevant to their interests and dose not achieve good result.
Author is absolutely right because when people consider felt in emotion when decision taking require and not think about it is really good or not, than it generate problem for their further progression.It is also We seen in various game,When particular team are vary curious about won the cup in final game, And some inappropriate decision takes the player and their team does not won the cup.This Scenario we seen in also science feel, When particular scientist felt in emotion where something he invented and think about that is not feasible in real life and research about it,and result as he does not reach his final decision because he have think solution with emotion and that in not possible in real life.
Describe this view I supports the author view when people take decision with emotion that 100 percent produce inappropriate result.People nature is very curious about something makes a new but, he/she can not think to much about particular thought and take a decision with emotion.There are many example in society we can see that poor decision makes worse than expected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, really, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1095505618 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58577600212 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463483146067 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.400617283 60.3974514979 315% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.111111111 118.986275619 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5555555556 23.4991977007 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243359347141 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11729166714 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964985202889 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15680695774 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919332227394 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 14.1392134831 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 48.8420337079 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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