Some people believe that sleeping is ony the relaxing method which allows people to get enough relief.Others believe that physical activities such as playing games and exercises also provide enough relaxation.Discuss both the views and provide your opinion.
While there are people who argue that the only way to relax is to sleep, many people are of the view that physical workout also helps to de-stress and I am of the same opinion.
Admittedly, getting enough sleep everyday is advantageous in many ways.Many scientists believe that eight hours of sleep everyday is necessary for a human body and mind.It helps body to take required rest and prepares it for the next day tasks.In addition, it helps an individual to forget about all the worries for sometime, thus, calming down the brain.If a person gets a good amount of sleep, he or she feels more energetic and fresh after that.
However, in my opinion, physical activities plays significant role in relaxing.Firstly, workout such as exercises or games helps to channelise all the negative energy into right direction.For example, many people go to gym to de-stress themselves from every day's tension.It relases hormones which keeps people happy and stress free.Secondly,playing games such as football and cricket helps to distract the mind.Many people enjoy playing games and put all the focus into it.Hence, helps to avoid getting negative thoughts and rejuvenates them.Thirdly,sports helps to improve the quality of sleep. It is usually observed that people often get deep and sound sleep after physical activities ,as a result,improving their mental health and mood the next day.
In conclusion, although sleeping is beneficial to get enough relief, other physical exercises such as sports play significantly important part in providing relaxation.
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Thank you so much.It was my
Thank you so much.It was my first attempt here and i am a beginner.
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also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10175891883 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619433198381 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.040662074 49.4020404114 364% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.6 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.4 20.7667163134 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.8 7.06120827912 479% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30208518133 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174863014336 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720960228426 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194494014812 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748386402973 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 13.0946893788 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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