The change of population structure has become a major topic of concern in modern society. In some parts of the world, the young are account for a larger percentage than the elderly people in the total population. This essay will discuss on both the positive impacts and drawbacks of this phenomenon and lead to a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, no one can deny that the higher proportion of youth bring various benefits to the whole society. The most significant point is that the young generation is dynamic, energetic and can contribute to the production and job sectors of the country and this has a huge positive effects on the economic development of the country. They come with fresh ideas and are free from superstitions and traditional beliefs. This gives them a competitive advantage for the faster process of the country. Educated young generation is the best resource a country can have and their contribution to their nation is significantly higher than the participation of children and elder people. Taking ICT sector for an example, this field is full of fresh minds and this is considered the most prominent one for the development of a country, especially in this era, and this sector is globally led by the young. In addition, young adults can be better leaders. Nowadays, they are becoming an increasingly important part of the government. One reason is that their youth is a huge advantage which allows them to be creative and up- to- date. This is likely to result in many innovative breakthrough policies and styles of management.
On the other hand, it is argued by some people that increasing number of young adults can bring about some undesirable impacts. First, all of these young people are short of real experience. If they have not faced challenges in their career, they are more likely to make mistakes, which can affect lives of many people. Another point that is worth mentioning is that youngsters need jobs and if the country can not generate enough employment opportunities for its young population, it can be a problem. India, for instance, has a high number of unemployment rate since it has the highest number of individuals in the age bracket of 20-40 years. Joblessness can lead to the increase in criminal activities.
All in all, it is understandable that people have a difference of opinion about this heated trend. I personally opine that the merits of having more young people outweigh its detriments based on the positive changes they bring about in a society.
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- Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas. Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss and give opinion. 67
- It is common practice for some students to take a gap year between high school and university in order to do charitable work abroad in underdeveloped countries.What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people of doing volunteer work? 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...he country and this has a huge positive effects on the economic development of the coun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92470588235 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81700815549 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498823529412 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.443856744 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2380952381 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04761904762 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175197911741 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490051098251 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345119119149 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100115389296 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313943306583 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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