Dear Amira
I hope you are fine, I miss you so much. I know that you are are curious to know about the major news items in my country but there is a great event happen I want you to know. our football team was gained the world cup for the first time.
Oh, yes, It is really . the match was held yesterday. I saw the match at the club with my family. the club was very crowded but it was so funny.at the first the other team had gained a goal a goal at a minute 21 then our team has gained a goal at a minute 42. So the first period of the match they were the same. but at the second period, our team had gained the winning goal at a minute 89. Yes, as I tell you, in the last minute of the match.i want to tell you that all the country is very happy. The streets were crowded after the match. People everywhere celebrating winning by playing fire plays, singing and dancing until early morning of the second day,
what about the news in your country?
See you soon.
Yours sincerely
Shereen
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: shaan_tech
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Amira I hope you are fine, I miss you so much....
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...ne, I miss you so much. I know that you are are curious to know about the major news it...
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Suggestion: Our
... great event happen I want you to know. our football team was gained the world cup ...
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Suggestion: .
... the first time. Oh, yes, It is really . the match was held yesterday. I saw the...
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Suggestion: The
...e first time. Oh, yes, It is really . the match was held yesterday. I saw the mat...
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Suggestion: The
...w the match at the club with my family. the club was very crowded but it was so fun...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a goal'.
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....at the first the other team had gained a goal a goal at a minute 21 then our team has gained...
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Suggestion: But
...period of the match they were the same. but at the second period, our team had gain...
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...ll you, in the last minute of the match.i want to tell you that all the country i...
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...e news in your country? See you soon. Yours sincerely Shereen
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... See you soon. Yours sincerely Shereen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06091370558 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.90416766716 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53807106599 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7982580162 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.1428571429 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17630611576 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603639291469 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946468916827 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204848768777 0.12726935374 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139480906036 0.0580467560999 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.85 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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