The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?
It would be argued that by some that the global environmental challenges could be mitigated by rising the cost of fuel as the best way. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this point of view.
To begin with, I believe that there are a number of better ways to reduce the environmental pollution around the world rather than increasing the cost of fuel. The first one is governments could encourage companies and housing areas to use renewable resources, like solar or wind power, which might positively affect the atmosphere. Another way is it is necessary for firms, especially companies in manufacturing industries, to recycle their waste used by installing recycling systems in their factories. This not allow only the firms use their materials effectively, but also has beneficial effects on the environment.
Additionally, a rise in the cost of fuel would cause the living cost to become more expensive than before. Goods and services which are essential for inhabitants, such as foods or medical services, are cases in point. The prices of these are more likely to be higher because of an increase in the cost of their input materials, which could make the lives of people living in poverty more difficult.
In conclusion, I would argue that rising the cost of fuel is not the most efficient way to tackle the problems related to the worldwide polluted environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... beneficial effects on the environment. Additionally, a rise in the cost of fuel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01739130435 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84048506201 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8396525499 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246817440752 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954968174482 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882321880308 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158182404487 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475771699157 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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