Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people claim that authorities should provide works to avert people from an offence. On the other hand, there is a believe that it is individuals own business to avoid it. In my opinion, hence the government has a power of influencing and governing, it should provide measures against the crime. However, it will be wrong from the side of residents to do nothing and rely on that.
Government is the centralized organization which provide comfortable life and basic necessities for its citizens. Different institutions and organizations from different fields of life, such as military, defense, education and etc. are depend on it. The role of these structures mostly organized the protect the rights of individuals. Due to its multiple structures, it is easy for the government to provide measures such as educating about crimes, avoiding situations and preventing circumstances which can lead to it.
However, every individual person by the seek of his security should take action as well, not only relying on government Firstly avoid companies and places where these conditions can take place. Chose correct type of surrounding people. Keep himself busy with useful things as education, sport and traveling, last bout not least take up some martial art.
In conclusion, Responsibility of the government for protecting its residents is obvious. Nevertheless, it can not guarantee a hundred percent of security, as a result, every single person should do their bit as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...an offence. On the other hand, there is a believe that it is individuals own business to ...
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Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
... offence. On the other hand, there is a believe that it is individuals own business to ...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...tion which provide comfortable life and basic necessities for its citizens. Different institution...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...e, such as military, defense, education and etc. are depend on it. The role of these str...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...litary, defense, education and etc. are depend on it. The role of these structures mos...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...le of these structures mostly organized the protect the rights of individuals. Due to its m...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to correct'
Suggestion: to correct
... these conditions can take place. Chose correct type of surrounding people. Keep himsel...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...ucation, sport and traveling, last bout not least take up some martial art. In conclu...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gle person should do their bit as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31355932203 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99628708282 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3568616414 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207522141601 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661112688793 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617036998213 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122325079876 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708655215917 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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