The table gives information about the national consumer expenditure of various items in five countries, namely Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.
Overall, in all the five countries, food, drinks and tobacco took up the highest percentage of the national consumer expenditure, while the leisure and education was the lowest category that people spent their money on it. Comparing the percentages of consumer expenditure of all the countries, Turkey was the highest one.
Regarding the category of food, drinks and tobacco, Turkey spent the most where the expenditure proportion reached 32.14%, followed by Irish people where they expended 28.9%. The expenditure of Spain, Italy, and Sweden was 18.80%, 16.36% and 15.77% respectively.
The lowest proportion of the national consumer expenditure was on leisure and education, where it was under 5% in all the five countries. A closer look at the data reveals that the lowest percentage of national consumer expenditure was in Spain, reaching a percentage of 1.98%.
It is clear that, Italian people spent more than the other on clothing and footwear at 9% in contrast to Sweden where their expenditure took up the lowest proportion at 5.40%. The average expenditure of Turkish, Irish and Swedish was about 6.5%.
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- The chart below shows the changes in average house pries in five different cities between 1990 to 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- the chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...all and the average slightly increased. On the other hand, the average house pri...
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...d. Between these five cities, London experience the most change in average price. In th...
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... average house price across the cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05660377358 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48383882774 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4559146568 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298336874423 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145873265098 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856828281383 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196472563081 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559465500901 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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