Few people devote time to hobbies nowdays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
In past we are happy people as individual and also as a community but now people do not have time to enjoy or follow their passion. In this essay we will discuss cause and its effect.
The main reason, why people are leaving their hobby is work life. Todays working culture of individuals are not balance, they are running for money and company or organization are focusing only on their profit. For example, a single earning parent have lots of demands to fulfill wheather it is from their wife or from children or from his boss, leaving individual stressed and no time to focus on oneself. So, it is very clear that he do not have time or energy to devote on himself.
As a society we are loosing charm of being together in evening, having little chit chat and pursuing their own favourite game or hobby. People do not have time to be together, sharing someone happiness and sorrow. Leaving society vulnerable to problems like, we even do not know who our neighbour is and what their problem is in addtion to it as a society we are moving towards height of selfishnesss like leaving accident victim on road because we are running towards our goals.
To counclude, as a individual we do not have time for oneself leaving stressed and as a community we are moving in declining phase.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60606060606 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45061413566 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554112554113 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1875389447 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165048649505 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750443636765 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388157070499 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106029936269 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468731858894 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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