Recently, general awareness about whether it is wise to friendship has aroused heated arguments.
People, nevertheless, have conflicting ideas; while some people say that to maintain friendship with a small number of people over long period time is important for happiness than to make new friends, others deem otherwise. From my own point of view, I am in agreement with the former stand.
The first reason for my opinion that can be seen by every people is that we can relieve our stress by meeting old friend, not new friends. Making new friends would be great experience. However, people nowadays are living a busy hectic life, so they are under great stress, but a lot of them don’t even realize they are stressed out. Stress is known to be a major factor that keeps us from being healthy, and many people are suffering from various problems. This is more serious than we think, so if it can ever be way to relieve stress, to maintain friendship and to meet comfortable friend is important for us.
Another equally important reason is, that saving time. There’s an old saying, “Time is gold.” This proverb emphasize the value of time, and this cannot be more important true in modern society.
We are living busy and hectic life, so saving time means we can do a lot more things later. Many people say that life is not fair, but everyone has 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. So we have no time to meet new friends. To meet friends with together over a long period time is more important.
Looking at all the statements above, there are many reasons to be considered, but at the end of the day, I would rather maintain friends with small number of people over long time!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 102, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...le say that to maintain friendship with a small number of people over long period time is importa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67774086379 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47046549135 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1657188412 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8666666667 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318039665289 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110977466219 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102370820756 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166640374683 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106071690719 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.