Nowadays people living in a large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are these problems? Do you think government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
Subsequently, inhabitants in the inner-city are being increased due to many advantages that larger cities have. Regardless, they inclined to encounter with some daily issues which they have to tackle with. These kind of problems are chiefly caused by over-population, and other factors.
Some would claim that these sort of issues will correct itself over time. In my view, however, there is much that can be done to address the issue constructively.
The major problem that extensive cities are being faced are matters, which being caused by over-population. Considerable allocation of private cars, and waiting in the long line are the spectacular example. One possible approach is to assess a prohibition to outsiders who are residing in the city. However, it would be a barrier between nations and, thus, as the international communication it can be influenced negatively.
Another possible approach is the encouragement of people to indwell in smaller towns. In other words, they should be provided with prodigious social consideration as well as the higher salaries. Most of the people enjoy earning money, hence, this might be the best solution to entice people to live in smaller towns.
In conclusion, despite the development of large cities, there are many negative prospects and the issues that we have to deal with in everyday life. The problems are often caused many factors, such as over-population. It may be seen insurmountable in next years, this is an issue that is solvable as a time goes by.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
... issues which they have to tackle with. These kind of problems are chiefly caused by over-...
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Line 2, column 24, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
...other factors. Some would claim that these sort of issues will correct itself over time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, such as, as well as, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18775510204 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06800880879 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.4380908002 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175502971277 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578693068079 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057123493045 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905090596048 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537834316868 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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