Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems
to what extent do you agree or disagree
What other measures do you think might be effective
Inventions in the last century such as motor vehicles has made life easier.However it has lead to various problems for example traffic and air pollution.People are of the opinion the hike in petrol prices is not a pertinent solution.In my opinion this effectively managed eco friendly cars
Cars have been basic mode of transport.Increase in petrol prices will not be a solution but will create further problems.Eco friendly cars which are powered by batteries will be more suitable and effective alternate solution.For instance an article was published in the New York Times which explained the effects of pollution on ozone layer and took in consideration the recent surge in eco friendly cars as a positive development and provided statistics which showed 28percent less pollution than normal if eco friendly cars were introduced.
People who are of the opinion that petrol prices should be increased.Hence put forward an arguement that such measures will drastically decrease usage of automobiles.So forth leading to decrease in pollution and traffic.For instance an article was published in the daily mail uk which showed there was a drop is 20 percent in car sales after petrol prices rose by 5 percent.
To conclude increase in petrol prices is a permaneng solution.Eco friendly cars can be used as an alternate solution and can be a more viable choice for the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21076233184 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12770544877 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587443946188 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 280.250284964 49.4020404114 567% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 387.333333333 106.682146367 363% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.3333333333 20.7667163134 358% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 7.06120827912 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139600976342 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106478979015 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0032780708599 0.0667982634062 5% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934971702151 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164959737751 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.3 13.0946893788 308% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 50.2224549098 -24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 11.3001002004 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.84 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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