Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Have you ever hated one season of the year? Think about it and you have probably remembered some season as winter or summer which you do not like its extreme weather. Although many people dislike weather which is too hot or too cold, and just are happy when the season that has the opposite weather comes; I strongly prefer to live in places where there are changes in the weather along the year, for the reasons that I will explain following.
First and foremost, many different sports could be practiced during a year. It is true that many people take advantage of the characteristics of each weather season in order to practice some enjoyable sports. By living in places that have the same climate all year long; for example a hot weather, you would lose your opportunity to do with your friends skying and have very fun time playing with the snow. On the other hand, if you live in a zone which has a variable climate during the year, you could do as surfing in hot seasons as skying in cold seasons.
Secondly, climate helps to create a variety of living beings in a same zone. Specific weather plays an important role in the development of some plants and animals. When you live in a place which has the same weather, you could not see the beauty of some species which need the opposite climate to survive, because their body is used to live in that zone. For instance, let me put an extreme example so that you could catch the idea faster. Polar bear are used to live in artic zones, if you live there (I know it is rare), they could be the only type of animal that you could know. Nevertheless, living in a zone which has different climates, you could know on live the beauty of a variety of animals and plants, because ones live in warm climates and others appear when cold climates appear.
Last but not least, seeing the same type of climate could cause you depression and boredom. It is known that cold climates could make you feel sad. This is because of the color attached to this season brings to mind the feeling of sadness. In addition, only watching the same climate indirectly makes you get bored, becayse you see the same all day long. Whereas, being able to see different climates allows you stay happy. When there is a change of season, you could change your boredom for happiness and by this means, delight more your lifetime.
In a nutshell, by considering all these reasons, we can reach the conclusion that even though some people like to live in zones where there is no shift in the weather, I consider that it is better to live in places which has different climates because you can practice different sports, delight and know different kind of animal and plants, and keep your happiness.
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