What is the solutions to obesity
These days, owing to developments and improvements in society, everyone tend to catch more diseases than 100 years ago. They are suffering from different diseases, such as malnutitrion, heart attack, cancer, etc. Among of them, obesity is increasingly become common. So, in this following essay, I will discuss several preventions and solutions to obesity.
To begin with, obesity is caused by bad habits of people. First of all, immoderation in daily meal is one of the main causes. They eat junk food, fast food, sweets, etc too much. You should balance nutrition and absord until you are full enough. If necessary, having vegetarian diets in lieu of animal meat, which has been proved to be more healthy and beneficial by sone trustworthy evidences.
Secondly, do wake up early and do morning exercises. In fact, you can participate in lots of outdoors activities, which provide you a captivating energy as well ad antibodies to counteract health-damaging diseases. Do not stay indoors with technological goods all day long, this detrimental activity are indirectly leading to other illnesses, not only obesity.
Finally, keep your mind serence and comfortable. Do not let anxiety, frustration or irritation harm your nerves. According to some scientists, people who get angry and anxious frequently are more at risk of obesity than anyone else. Consequently, you need to self-control in mood and always be happy.
In conclusion, I think that the reasons why people get fat is to have lipid and others bad food continuously, as well as to sit too much and to suffer from bad mood. The best way to stay healthy is imbiling good nutrition, taking sporty activities and smile every day.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1268115942 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93674786588 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713768115942 0.524837075471 136% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6887971257 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6111111111 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805462287871 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248092253241 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474696860387 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0410008394355 0.150856017488 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410255390568 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.2 Out of 6.0
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